Old Loves ~~ anna hood
Her old man don't know
she braids 'em in her hair
ties each one behind
a shiny gold bead.
Hundreds of 'em.
Her old man don't know
she keeps 'em in her pockets
hidden among Tic Tacs
grocery lists
lint.
He don't know
they swim the crimson
pathways of her legs
and arms, that they part
the secret spot
he can't find.
She lets them out
at night when it's dark
enough to die
her skin technicolour
bright
brazen as a peacock.
They kiss her
with wine hot lips
phantom tongues lick
her sweet juices.
Her old man grunts
reaches for her.
She sighs, tucks them away
her fingertips glowing
like pearls in the dark.
Her old man don't know
she braids 'em in her hair
ties each one behind
a shiny gold bead.
Hundreds of 'em.
Her old man don't know
she keeps 'em in her pockets
hidden among Tic Tacs
grocery lists
lint.
He don't know
they swim the crimson
pathways of her legs
and arms, that they part
the secret spot
he can't find.
She lets them out
at night when it's dark
enough to die
her skin technicolour
bright
brazen as a peacock.
They kiss her
with wine hot lips
phantom tongues lick
her sweet juices.
Her old man grunts
reaches for her.
She sighs, tucks them away
her fingertips glowing
like pearls in the dark.
12 Comments:
Secrets of the self and beautiful to the heart.
Top-class as always,Anna.
I must admit, I couldn't fully understand this. But the words were fluid, beautiful. Well done, Anna!
Oh wonderfully evocative, Anna! Loved this one!
Thanks girls!
Susan as always.
Saaleha, I never understand most poetry... never know what the devil they're talking about.
Atyllah, glad you like it.
Anna, this is beautiful.
I guess her old man won't ever know about those old loves, now will he...
I liked the way this flowed:
Her old man don't know
she braids 'em in her hair
ties each one behind
a shiny gold bead.
Hundreds of 'em.
Her old man don't know
she keeps 'em in her pockets
hidden among Tic Tacs
grocery lists
lint.
Beautiful!
Wow...I'm seem to be reading a lot of poetry online today. But this is definitely top drawer...among the best so far today!
Hey lehane, thanks so much for stopping by
and Roberta, i think her old man doesn't know much about much
It's wonderful and highly erotic.
Anna, as always your imagery is superb! This was masterfully done. I wanted to read it again and again.
jas
hey Oreos!! thanks for stopping by and leaving a great comment!
Hi Anna,
this poem is a brilliant because of its very rich imagery and what it holds for as much as it gives...
best..
abhay
Hey Abhay!! Thanks so much for stopping by and taking the time to read and of course most important leaving a nice comment!
I so appreciate it.
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